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Her silver tounge weaves a web of lies,
See the deception in his sparkling eyes.
They say they'll always be there to
Help eachother through their fear,
But all they ever do is cry a sea of tears.


They hate eachother so much,
But they crave one another's lustful touch.
They glare at eachother, they yell and sream,
To eachother they don't mean anything.


His anger intensifies as he grinds his teeth,
Hee can't tell, but she's shaking beneath.


Quickly they each pull out a gun,
Ready to end the battle that'll never be won.
Before they could think they fired with two loud bangs,
In their ears the sound of gunshots rang.


Their blood is spewed everywhere,
But they know and they din't care.
From their eyes tears began to fall,
The look they gave eachother said it all.


They were dying and they knew,
For the last words out of their mouths were


'I hate you'.

©2008-2009 ~SnowRunt
:iconsnowrunt:

Author's Comments

I was listening to the song 'I Hate Everything About You' By Three Days Grace and I got this in my head...
I've never had an experience like this, but I wanted to write this for some reason.
Enjoy.
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:iconjanzfriend:
:cry: that was so sad it was awesome but so very sad :( -sniff-

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*Quack* :\/----I am cow... I eat grass...:nod:
:iconsnowrunt:
Thank you =D
Yeah, it is sad.
I normally don't write negitive graphic poetry like this.....:|

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She has natural cocaine running through her veins :nod:
~B.R.
:iconjanzfriend:
^^ welcomes

:3 sad poems make meh sad,
yeah yeah but its a good negitive graphic Poem x3

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*Quack* :\/----I am cow... I eat grass...:nod:
:iconsnowrunt:
XD
A good negitive graphic poem...hmmm... :lmao:

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She has natural cocaine running through her veins :nod:
~B.R.
:iconjanzfriend:
yesh xD lol

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*Quack* :\/----I am cow... I eat grass...:nod:
:iconsaiaraauthorgirl:
Wow... how sad. Interesting story, though. :D

I love Three Days Grace! :headbang:

- Kai


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